Manuscript Evaluation
Have you finally finished self-editing your manuscript, but you’re not sure it’s quite ready for a developmental edit? You may instead be ready for a fiction manuscript evaluation.
Maybe you’ve gone through a round or two of beta reading but received conflicting feedback? It’s likely time to seek out a trained editor who’s geared up to complete a manuscript evaluation.
Think of this evaluation (also known as a manuscript critique or manuscript assessment) as a Developmental Edit Lite. My evaluations center on the following:
- Character and Plot Development
- Conflict, Stakes, and Pacing
- Structural Framework
Unlike a full developmental edit, I only do one pass on your manuscript and there are no inline comments. Your evaluation letter is also much shorter, but you’ll receive pointed suggestions related to the above storytelling principles as they apply to your manuscript:
- Trained bird’s-eye view of your story’s landscape: making sure your character’s goals, motivations, and conflicts are clear.
- Laser focus on your particular vision and goals for your story and whether the on-page story accurately reflects them.
- Expert knowledge of how the elements of fiction are or are not working together in your story to effectively impact your target readers.
- Deep familiarity with your work’s genre and its readers’ expectations.
Note:
I do not provide editorial services for the following genres or with the following content. If your manuscript falls in one of these categories, or contains any of the listed content, I truly thank you for considering Sage Editing, but I will not be able to assist you in your editorial needs.
Genres
- High or Contemporary Fantasy
- Speculative Fiction
- Literary Fiction
- Horror
- Poetry
Content
- Excessive On-page Physical Torture or Violence
- Stereotypes Of or Against Marginalized Groups
- Dubious/Nonconsensual Consent
- On-page Sexual Violence/Assault
- Hauntings or Graphic Body Horror
- Excessive On-page Drug Use

Reflecting On Your Story One Word At A Time!
